IN REVIEW: Scores Page

[ohmyjapan16]

Scores Page


A. Overview
I. What is the scores page?
II. How do I get to the scores page?

B. The stat bars
I. Rank
II. Warband
III. Land
IV. Networth
V. Clan
VI. Race
VII. Location
VIII. Kills

C. Player Status
I. Protected/Vacation
II. Dead
III. Disabled
IV. Administrator





A. Overview
I.What is the scores page? The scores page shows all of the warbands currently playing and the status of each. it alos shows warband rakings, networth, and more.
II. How do I get to the scores page? To get to the scores page, go
to the left-hand side of your screen. There, you will see a column with a number of links with different sections. It is the second link under the "Information" section.

B. The stat bars
I. Rank- Under this bar, you can see what each of the warband's ranks are. At the top is the number one player and the bottom, you will see who is in last place. You rank goes by how high your networth is. Note that only players in the white font are active.
II. Warband- Under this bar, you can see all warband names that are playing or are in protection. Note the number next to each warband name. If you click a number next to a warband, it will bring up their profile, which brings you more in-depth stats like offenses and defences.
III. Land- This tells you how much land each player has. You get land by attacking and use it to raise your networth.
IV. Networth- This tells you what a warband's networth is. All players are listed from highest to lowest networth. A warband'networth depends on a variety of factors such as land, troops, and resources.
V. Clan- Under this bar, you will see either a clan tag or the word
"none." If there is a tag, you can click it and it will take you to that clan's crier page, telling you all about the clan. If you see the word "none," that means that the warband is clanless.
VI. Race- Under this bar, you will see what race of animal each warband is. Every race has weaknesses and strengths, so you should pick one that best suits your strategy.
VII. Location- Under this bar, you can see each warband's location, or era. To attack someone in a different location, you must cast the "prepare hawks" hawk mission. The three locations in FAF are Southsward, Mossflower, and Northlands. Each location has advantages and disadvantages, so you should pick one that best suits your strategy.
VIII. Kills- This shows how many players a certain warband has killed. To kill a warband, you have to attack a different warband until they have zero land.

C. Player Status
I. Protected/Vacation- When you first sign up, you will be protected from attacks by other people until you have used 301 turns. After that, you are fair game to anyone. If you have to leave for a couple of days, you can put your account in vacation. After 12 hours, your account can not be attacked until you come back. Note that your account is on vacation no matter what for 72 hours. These players ae shown on the scores page with green font.
II. Dead- Once an account has been attacked until they have zero land, their account is put into the graveyard, which can be viewed by clicking the "Graveyard" link under the status bar.
III. Disabled- If you try to make more than one account, both accounts will be disabled automatically and moved to the "Hall of Shame," which can be viewed by clicking the Hall of Shame link under the status bar.
IV. Administrator- These people are in control of the game. You can not see them on the scores page, but you can message them with any problems to warband #1. They are shown in pink font.


Eh, wrote this pretty fast, might not be as high of quality.

You know the drill people. Post your suggestions/comments.

Thanks,
ohmyjapan16

[Nohc]

Note that only players in the white font are active.

That's a bit confusing, they could be active but in protection. Maybe you could say that only players in white can interact with other players and be interacted with.

At the top is the number one player and the bottom, you will see who is in last place.

At the top is the number one player and at the bottom is the player in last place.

II. Warband- Under this bar, you can see all warband names that are playing or are in protection. Note the number next to each warband name. If you click a number next to a warband, it will bring up their profile, which brings you more in-depth stats like offenses and defences.

II. Warband- Under this bar, you can see all warband in the game and their status. Note the number next to each warband name. If you click a number next to a warband, it will bring up their profile, which brings you more in-depth statistics like total and recent offenses and defenses.

There's a couple spacing, punctuation and spelling errors as well. Like near the beginning where you don't capitalize "it" and spell "also" wrong.

Other than that it's pretty good.

[The Beatles]

This is good stuff; but I feel it's a bit too dumbed-down. Any ideas?

[edit] Well, we have a good Scores Page entry now. Closing.